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IT WAS MY FIRST TIME

By Maruf Ajimati

January 16, 2020

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I thought he was the one I was waiting for
We met online a few months ago
Being a lady with lots of suitors, I didn’t pay him special attention
We crossed paths the day I was least expecting it
As I stood awaiting him
He walked towards me, taking his step lightly, smiling brightly as the sunlight
His height got me lost in a trance
His broad shoulder and chest made my heart bumbled
This is the type of guy I’m craving for
He finally reached me and said the word ” hi”

All I did was staring at his captivating pupil
I’m falling for his eyes, but they don’t know me
Our hands clenched for a shake and the warmth came to me like an electric shock
Creating butterflies in my stomach
His gap teeth and hairstyle wakens all my cells from slumber
His voice echoes in my ear igniting a calming effect on me
I think I fell so hard for someone I just met for the first time
No one has ever made me felt this way
I bid him goodbye, hoping to meet him again soon
As I left his side, I can’t help the streams of love flowing down my eyes
It was a great and beautiful sensation
Boom! I heard my alarm blaring just to realize It was all a dream
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119 COMMENTS

Comfort January 16, 2020 At 2:56 pm

Wao!!!
Lovely❤️

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- IGold January 16, 2020 At 4:47 pm
  
  Nice,I can’t believe u did this!
  
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  - Comfort January 18, 2020 At 11:09 am
    
    Thanks so much
    
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Chenemi January 16, 2020 At 3:15 pm

Nice poetry… keep it up

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 11:16 am
  
  Thank u
  
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Sanusi January 16, 2020 At 3:15 pm

Beautiful!!

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Visy January 16, 2020 At 3:16 pm

Nice onee

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 11:16 am
  
  Thanks dear
  
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Jibike January 16, 2020 At 3:31 pm

Awesome💖💖

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- Comfort January 19, 2020 At 4:49 am
  
  Thanks dear
  
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Lateepha Ibrahim January 16, 2020 At 3:31 pm

Wow 😍

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 11:17 am
  
  Thanks bby
  
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OmaEko1 January 16, 2020 At 3:52 pm

Captivating and indeed an awesome piece

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 11:12 am
  
  Thank u sir
  
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Enyo-ojo January 16, 2020 At 4:02 pm

Nice work gal🤭🤭

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 3:59 pm
  
  Thanks babe
  
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Egbunu Adejoh Jonathan January 16, 2020 At 4:02 pm

Woooow.
That’s great!
More ink to your pen.

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 4:00 pm
  
  Amen
  Thanks
  
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Emeka January 16, 2020 At 4:03 pm

Keep the pen ink flowing gal✍️✍️✍️

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 11:09 am
  
  Thanks Emeka… Weldon!!!
  
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Agnes January 16, 2020 At 4:08 pm

This is nice

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 11:10 am
  
  Thanks babe
  
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Anthony January 16, 2020 At 4:16 pm

Wonderful

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 11:11 am
  
  Thank u
  
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Theresa January 16, 2020 At 4:28 pm

Nice one dear

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 11:19 am
  
  Thanks babe
  
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Elijah January 16, 2020 At 4:33 pm

Lovely piece dear

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 11:20 am
  
  Thank u
  
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Egbunu Adejoh Jonathan January 16, 2020 At 4:37 pm

Woooow
That’s great.
More ink to your pen.

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 11:22 am
  
  Thanks so much
  
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Kachi January 16, 2020 At 4:48 pm

Wow.. Lovely.. . But why is it just a dream. .. That description fits me more you know 💕😍

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- Comfort January 17, 2020 At 6:20 am
  
  Smiles…. Ok Na
  Next time
  
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ImGold January 16, 2020 At 4:49 pm

Nice,I can’t believe u did this!.
Such wonderful interlocks of a perfectly made sentence and grammar.

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- Comfort January 17, 2020 At 6:21 am
  
  Thanks dear❤️❤️❤️🤭
  
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Orogbemi January 16, 2020 At 4:50 pm

Nice write up

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- Comfort January 17, 2020 At 6:21 am
  
  Thanks dear
  
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Fatima January 16, 2020 At 4:52 pm

Beautiful!! Nice one😍

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- Comfort January 17, 2020 At 6:22 am
  
  Thanks babe
  
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Tony January 16, 2020 At 5:21 pm

Wow
This is lovely

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- Comfort January 17, 2020 At 6:17 am
  
  Thanks dear
  
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AGT January 16, 2020 At 5:27 pm

Nice one

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 11:19 am
  
  Thank u
  
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Felix January 16, 2020 At 5:30 pm

Great Poem, heart piercing. Thumbs up Comfort

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- Comfort January 17, 2020 At 6:22 am
  
  Thanks sir
  
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ossai xander_23 January 16, 2020 At 5:41 pm

Wow….. My own eyes are red 😂.. Nice write up..

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 4:01 pm
  
  Thanks dear
  
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Tochi January 16, 2020 At 6:05 pm

Nice write-up

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 11:08 am
  
  Thanks so much
  
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Jim Hickey January 16, 2020 At 6:22 pm

Really nice work. It was very descriptive I got every pixel of the picture on my minds screen.
You should work on your tenses, though.
Regardless, really nice.

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 11:08 am
  
  Wao!!!!
  Thank u
  
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Adams Felicia January 16, 2020 At 6:49 pm

Nice piece dear, keep it up

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- Comfort January 19, 2020 At 1:14 pm
  
  Thanks bby
  
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Adama Felicia January 16, 2020 At 6:51 pm

Nice piece dear, keep it up

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- Comfort January 17, 2020 At 6:18 am
  
  Thanks dearie
  
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St. Jøsh January 16, 2020 At 7:14 pm

Nice one

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- Comfort January 17, 2020 At 6:19 am
  
  Thanks dear
  
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Ogaji Musa Emmanuel January 16, 2020 At 8:25 pm

Awesome! More ink to your pen…. The sky is your beginning.

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- Comfort January 16, 2020 At 8:48 pm
  
  Thanks dear
  
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- Comfort January 17, 2020 At 6:18 am
  
  Amen
  Thanks dear
  
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Sule Cyril January 16, 2020 At 8:34 pm

That’s my girl
Keep it up👍👍

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- Comfort January 16, 2020 At 8:49 pm
  
  Thanks dear
  
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Pam January 16, 2020 At 8:44 pm

Beautiful ….

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 11:06 am
  
  Thanks
  
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Igono Abel Raphael January 16, 2020 At 8:55 pm

Cheers… Quite interesting

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 11:07 am
  
  Thank u
  
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Ojima Victor January 17, 2020 At 2:31 am

The suspense and thrill was captivating. Nice piece of art Comfort. I hope to see more 😉

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- Comfort January 17, 2020 At 2:07 pm
  
  Thanks ojima❤️
  
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Joy January 17, 2020 At 6:16 am

Nice… Kudos!!!!

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- Comfort January 17, 2020 At 2:05 pm
  
  Thanks bby
  
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Michael January 17, 2020 At 9:24 am

Wow, keep it up, dear

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- Comfort January 17, 2020 At 2:04 pm
  
  Thanks dear
  
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Vincent January 17, 2020 At 2:42 pm

That’s interesting. nice one.
so poetic, you will definitely make a good poet. keep it up.

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- Comfort January 17, 2020 At 6:24 pm
  
  Thanks so much sir
  
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Tesie Ugwuanyi January 17, 2020 At 3:09 pm

Super proud of you baby girl..

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- Comfort January 17, 2020 At 6:23 pm
  
  Thanks so much bby
  
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Comfort January 17, 2020 At 6:19 pm

Thanks so much sir

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Jaytee January 17, 2020 At 9:37 pm

Master piece

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- Comfort January 17, 2020 At 10:14 pm
  
  Thanks my gee
  
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Faithful January 17, 2020 At 10:02 pm

This is lovely ☺️

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- Comfort January 17, 2020 At 10:16 pm
  
  Thanks dear
  
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Ebun January 17, 2020 At 10:38 pm

Beautiful piece!!

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- Comfort January 17, 2020 At 11:35 pm
  
  Thanks so much ma
  
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Sam January 18, 2020 At 8:58 am

Very nice work

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 10:37 am
  
  Thanks so much
  
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Comfort January 18, 2020 At 11:18 am

Thanks bby

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Timfred January 18, 2020 At 2:34 pm

Nice write up dear

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 5:39 pm
  
  Thanks dear
  
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Emmanuel January 18, 2020 At 5:45 pm

Your work is really lovely… Interesting one dear…

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- Comfort January 18, 2020 At 6:33 pm
  
  Thanks so much dear❤️
  
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Feyi January 18, 2020 At 7:02 pm

Nice work there girl….keep it up.

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Comfort January 18, 2020 At 8:34 pm

Thanks babe

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Oluchi January 19, 2020 At 11:53 am

Nice😘

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- Comfort January 19, 2020 At 10:17 pm
  
  Thanks
  
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Bitrus Ijanada January 19, 2020 At 1:36 pm

NYC one baby girl

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- Comfort January 19, 2020 At 10:19 pm
  
  Thanks
  
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chi_chi January 19, 2020 At 8:34 pm

Nice write up dear
Keep it up😊😊

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- Comfort January 19, 2020 At 10:18 pm
  
  Thanks
  
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Young Ancient January 19, 2020 At 11:10 pm

It’s really a nice one👍

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- Comfort January 20, 2020 At 6:49 am
  
  Thanks dear
  
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Achema Faruk January 21, 2020 At 11:39 am

Lovely piece

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- Comfort January 21, 2020 At 2:53 pm
  
  Thanks
  
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Comfort January 21, 2020 At 2:54 pm

Thanks

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Farida January 21, 2020 At 4:13 pm

Nice one gal

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- Comfort January 21, 2020 At 8:50 pm
  
  Thanks bby
  
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Gracie January 21, 2020 At 9:48 pm

Wow! Super incredible!

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- Comfort January 22, 2020 At 3:41 am
  
  Thanks garlie
  
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Tesa January 21, 2020 At 11:15 pm

Nice

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- Comfort January 22, 2020 At 3:42 am
  
  Thanks garlie
  
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Edward January 22, 2020 At 7:36 pm

This is amazing am so in love with this. One love dear.

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- Comfort January 22, 2020 At 10:36 pm
  
  Thanks boo
  
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Favour January 22, 2020 At 7:57 pm

Nice

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- Comfort January 23, 2020 At 12:45 pm
  
  Thanks
  
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Patricia January 22, 2020 At 8:03 pm

Very lovely piece

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- Comfort January 23, 2020 At 12:47 pm
  
  Thanks
  
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Kizito January 23, 2020 At 10:01 am

Nice write up…..

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- Comfort January 23, 2020 At 12:46 pm
  
  Thanks
  
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Tobi January 24, 2020 At 11:36 am

This was fun to read, I’ll give it 8½ over 10.

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Mercy January 31, 2020 At 1:02 pm

Nice write up dear
You really tried

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