Oh my darling mother
Who aided my cross over
I swam in her river
And she was my feeder
Still my leader
Paid my teacher
Even while things were meagre
A standing ovation wouldn’t do for a consolation
You were no ordination but I, your creation
Regardless of any invention, they’ll be no invasion
Even in the congregation, I’ll still have you a motivation
Her sews came in rows
In my coats
Were roved boats
In my nose
She had sucked close
Her loads were my woes
She had sold all her soles
Just to pay for my dose
I’ll take loans for her colds
In this day
We celebrate your day
We say you shine like the day
May your going down be a nay
Just like the ray
You’ve penetrated our day
SO WE SAY
A HAPPY BIRTHDAY
MUMMY BRAY AND SHINE LIKE A RAY FOR ALL YOUR DAY
ITS YOUR DAY
SO WE SAY A HAPPY BIRTHDAY
Author: Odeolaj
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Great piece!
Boy yo nice write up
This write up is one of d best I ve read so far
Coming from d depth of d heart towards a mother.. It means so much.. I love it😊
Nice one
Your Comment Here… that’s nice
Your comment here…. Awesome…Keep it up
Nice poet
Happy birthday Mummy Bray
Waw… So nice i need to share this
This is nice❤️
It’s very thoughtful
It really nice
But the coordination is not firm
Nice one bro
I love this ❤️❤️
😍😍😍😍
So nice
Brace up, dear!
Kudos on this.
Amazing👍👍👍👍👍
Your Comment Here…wow, superb
To all those who have commented their true mind I really do appreciate it… for you that didn’t post your true feelings 😕😕😕….pls if you truly appreciate this piece kindly do not leave without a comment …and as well ensure you post your true feelings sha …..Odeolaj cares
Good job bro
Divine Inspirations in Jesus name
This is Beautiful, I love it
Nice post
Superb
Wonderful
Wow so Inspiring..
Weldone Mr Odelaj😉
Great piece!
What a great and motivative write up! Keep it up.💯
This is so inspiring
Amazing.
More ink to your pen
Wow… this is cool
Thanks bro
Love each and every lines.
Learnt to appreciate my mom better.
Nice
This is really great.
Am happy for you for this.
U’ll for sure go places
🙌🏿
Love this
Great,
Your pen speaks grate of your tongue odeolaj
I know u have more, yet to be read by me….
God bless u more m sure you will soar higher with these write ups.
One love. ❣️
Wow.. Great!. Keep it up.💪👏
Nice one
Keep it up
Need no better line for my mum’s birthday, I love the rhythm..much love
Thanks bro
Awwn I love this,you did a fabulous job.Keep it up Bro
Great job
Keep it on
This is really gud
Nice one.. Keep up the good work
Not too good work more on yourself
This is a very nice job bro ,it wonderful……
Wow…. it’s nice
Keep it up
Wow!!!😱😱😱
Though not a poet am convinced this is a magnificent and captivating piece💪💪💪. I love everything about the poem especially the rhymes😁😁. I believe in you bro the sky is your starting point👌👏.
I don’t know if I know you but then I’m fucking blushing 😊 right now
wow so amazing
Am really impressed buy dis poem and it’s so lovely
GREAT JOB
Fantastic job! Welldone sir
Anticipating for more
Memories and Melodies across the lines, the stanzas… Mom, Sweet Mom…
Kudos, great poet…
Nice poem
Nice write up, keep it up it is a lovely poet
Nice dose for a precious rose like my mother! Good job ola
👍
This is so beautiful 😍 I love this….
Aesthetic ,this is best av come by , keep soaring higher
this is really amazing, keep it up!
Lovely poem
Masterclass! More power to your elbow… 👍👍
Wow, exceptional piece. Just marvelous 👏This is beautiful in both context and how it was passed across… We sure love our mothers 😍💝💝
Wow, this is amazingly great
It’s breath-taking… Like bravo… Keep soaring higher … With this,I believe the sky is your beginning
#bless up
Awesome 🦋
Nice piece it’s really wonderful
Lovely piece
Lovely piece pal….
Wow, it’s a really nice poet,keep it up bro
What a lovely poem 😍😍
Keep it up dear 👍👍👍
job well done
keep it up
great work
Wow
What a lovely poem.
It’s really love it, it feels like am in it
😘🥰😗
This is really amazing.
You are going places…
This is extremely good.
This is nice.
Work more and improve yourself.
Fantastic 💖
Amazing and opulent.
The Love of Mothers cannot be overemphasize.
Nice write-up, improve more.💪
Fascinating👊💫💝
Wow nice write up bro more grace to improve more🙏🙏
God bless our mothers. Nice writing
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