Poles apart, like night and day,
a distinct twitter by the lark at the balcony:
the sun, basking in the glory of its radiance,
ripping off gloom, tainting bliss to each leaf
on the tall palm trees with a perfect spectrum of the sunshade,
modeling it.
About six minutes after the trees had fluttered oozes,
when the whirlwind had raced to the east,
the dusty fog, like the golden sands of Egypt, dropped rapidly,
you, Juliet, marched closer, from the distant peak.
“I knew you were always going to come back for me”,
I confessed in my mind, with a big smile reflecting fleet.
And as you moved closer, Juliet, as the zephyrs waved your sarong,
a cloud in the west like a purple pall crept upward;
a life, a presence, like the air,
hazel eyesโ memory like a well-ordered cupboard
flashed through when I first saw them; captivating all day long,
enchanting, fine and dandy, elating: crazily enamored.
A smile flashed over her face, like sunshine over a flower,
the charm in her eyes, it was always in her eyes, always,
and her pearly designed teeth glistering in sparks of silver,
an isle of paradise with a fairy glaze.
above every other elegant desire,
she could slay, but she chose grace.
The hinge cringes as Juliet unlocks the door to the living room,
I could evidently see the awe on her face
when the twirling roses in the wine bottle let-off their balmy perfumes.
It was joy unspeakable for me, beau, like flames
to skim every happiness that ran through your veins,
and your lips, like two budded roses in full bloom;
a Rosรฉ, a Burgundy, good cheer and many a moon, musings for always, in Reims.
Author: ‘Jแปba, 08163194449
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Beautiful words, perfectly arranged
thanks, i’m humbled.
Your use of adjectives, it creates a fluid, vivid description. Loved it. Started to read some parts and the elaborateness reminded me of a spoken word poetry performance and I loved the way it sounded in my head. It’s beautiful.
thanks jo. i’m humbled by your review.
Wonderful
Dope and creative
Jobs man… Nice flow. You gay the pen and the ink bro ๐ช
thank you so much.
To Juliet a dream from paradise
Wonderful
Wow….a big wow.
Awesome words,beautifully arranged,interesting to read
thanks a lot. i’m glad you could grasp it. you’re very much appreciated.
Nice piece you’ve gat.
It makes me wanna change my name to Juliet, the words are well arranged and so enticing, nice one dear, keep it up…..May God strengthen your knowledge….I love it so much I wanna start writing poets too
thank you so much.
Your words are like music. Like a soft footed gazelle, such gait
wow! thank you so much. i’m overwhelmed by this.
What a master piece, an exquisite use of words. More of it!
Extraordinary expression of words
Wonderful! What a wonderful piece
Love the aesthetic of this write up. It’s deserve an accolades.
Good job!!!
Beautiful piece
This brought to mind the poems of Solomon. It’s a beautiful synching harmony to the ears of dancers on love’s halogen lit stage.
The beet
Great piece
Well pieced bro๐
“I knew you were always going to come back for me”. My fav phrase. Classic piece, More ink to the quill
thank you king. i’m glad you love it.
Beautiful!
Boss you gerrit
I am utterly in awe of this rendition. The world does need more of this kind of relatable poetry.
thank you so much. this comment made me speechless.
Amazing piece
Waw…. awesome!
Joba darling.
This is plausible, kudos to you
thank you so much dear.
This is nice, so expressive.
Joba ๐ฅ…
Good job….
Beautifully woven together ๐๐ฝ
Fantastic!
Poetic words minister to the soul, and when artistically woven by a creative gem like Joba….it inspires!
Nice one.
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This is wonderful ๐ฅ
Keep it up bro
Great one bro ๐๐
Nice
Nice
This is wonderful
I like this. Beautiful!!!
Dope o
So beautiful a piece!
Nice one Man
Awesome!
Wow wow
A nice write up
More ink to ur pen ๐
This is a beautiful poem. I’m just saying ‘awwwwn’. Especially the part of ‘she could slay but she chose grace’. I mean, what????
with tears in my eyes, thank you so much.
You are so good at what you do. This is exquisite…a masterpiece
Beautiful piece
Beautiful, keep it up
Beautiful piece!! I think Juliet is my other name๐
juliet, my beloved. thank you.
This is very beautiful โฅ๏ธ
Jobsy Jojo……where did u get your brain from….I wantโบ
This is beautiful
Lovely
Beautiful piece
Fabulousa
Greater heights
Good one
Awww๐…..Beautiful piece dear
Perfect
Lovely
It’s cool
Nice one dearโค
That poem could dance perfectly to a flowery ballet! Absolutely brilliant!
Beautiful,romantic and unique
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Mafo, Mo wa pelu e
Mad o
Bro of life
Sleek
wow, it thus make sense